Wednesday, May 25, 2011

123 Main Street
Penticton British Columbia,
V2A 6W5

May 24, 2011

R, Kleats
Rugby Coach
120 Green Avenue,
Penticton, British Columbia
V2A 5R7


Dear Mr. Kleats

I am Jared Collier, My son David plays on your rugby team. I know how much of a commitment it is to coaching a rugby team and I appreciate the time you put into this team. It is understood how many responsibilities you have and how much time it takes to fulfill them. Recently my son has approached me with a few concerns he has about the team.

It has come to my recollection that you often attend practices late, again I understand that you are a busy man. But practices are disorganized which brings some concern to myself. My son may not be the most athletic student and I've noticed that, that has reflected on his playing time. It has also come to my attention that when he does play he often gets yelled at whenever he makes a mistake. I feel as if this team has to much emphasis on winning and not enough on having fun and developing as players. It would be much apreceated if I could receive a reply to this message and reasonable actions will be put in place.

1 comment:

  1. 2 of 3 assignments. Letter has a diplomatic tone, but needs to be finished. Satirical essay topic is good. Both need extensive proofreading for basic mechanical errors.

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